Spotlight & Giveaway: Abducted by a Prince by Olivia Drake

Posted April 27th, 2014 by in Blog, Spotlight / 44 comments

Today it is my pleasure to spotlight Abducted by a Prince by Olivia Drake 


She’s not waiting for her prince. He’s not looking for a bride. But sometimes the most unlikely love stories end in ‘happily ever after’…


Ellie Stratham gave up her childhood dreams of a fairy tale romance long ago. To repay her late father’s debts, she’s forced to serve her spoiled cousin, Lady Beatrice. But Ellie has devised a secret plan to escape her life as a drudge. A plan that is thrown into jeopardy when she’s abducted by a mysterious stranger.


A notorious seducer of women—and a scoundrel to boot—Damien Burke has earned his nickname as the Demon Prince. But his plot to kidnap Lady Beatrice to make her brother return a priceless heirloom backfires—and he ends up with their penniless cousin Ellie as his hostage. By the time Damien realizes his mistake, he and his fiery-willed captive are trapped in a remote castle during a wild winter storm. And he soon finds that the true hostage may be his own heart.


Chapter 1
“This is a travesty,” said Walt Stratham, Viscount Greaves. “I demand a rematch at once.”
“We’ll discuss the matter in private.” Noting the curious glances from several club members in the corridor, Damien Burke ushered the irate man into his study and closed the door.
The spacious chamber featured a claw-footed desk on a Persian rug, the finest that money could buy. At this late hour, the tall windows showed pinpricks of light against the darkness of the city. The scent of leather bindings came from the bookcase behind the desk. On the opposite wall, a gently hissing fire warded off the February chill.
No expense had been spared on the décor. Damien had fought long and hard to acquire the trappings of the upper crust. While his fellow Eton graduates had inherited their wealth, he had started out with nothing. He had accrued his own fortune, first by his skill at gambling, and then by prudent investments in shipping, property, and this club.

With ruthless resolve, he had built Demon’s Den into the most fashionable gaming site in London. Here, gold flowed freely from the pockets of the aristocrats into his coffers. If the nobility barred him from their drawing rooms, then by God, he would make them pay for the privilege of occupying his establishment.
In particular, this man.
Ignoring the pair of chairs by the hearth, Damien strolled to the desk, took a brown leather pouch from his pocket, and tossed it onto the polished surface. The ivory counters inside made a satisfying clink.
The viscount glowered at the sack. No wonder. The sum of his losses represented a full five years’ worth of his quarterly allowance from his father, the Earl of Pennington. The earl had a reputation as a harsh, miserly man. With the expense of launching a daughter into society in the coming season, Lord Pennington wouldn’t be amenable to making loans to his profligate eldest son.
Walt faced a grim future hounded by creditors. Not even his status as heir to an earldom would save him. His only recourse would be to agree to the terms that Damien would present to him in a moment.
But first, Damien wanted to savor his victory.
He purposely took his time opening the sack. Walt had changed little since their school days; he still exuded the inborn superiority of the upper class. But now the hazel eyes beneath a thatch of ginger hair revealed a telltale trace of panic. Over the years Damien had taught himself to read the nuances of mannerisms that betrayed a man’s thoughts. A slight tic or nervous gesture, a tapping of the fingers or the lifting of an eyebrow, all served as clues to the cards in his hands.
Damien had employed that talent tonight to reel in his prey. He had craved this moment for over fifteen years. However, unlike the hotheaded schoolboy he had once been, he kept his expression cool and his emotions disciplined.
He poured the little discs into a heap on the desk and began to stack them into neat piles. He didn’t really need to add up the counters; he already knew the precise amount of his winnings. Rather, the action was designed to further fray Walt’s nerves.
“It’s time to settle your debt,” Damien stated. “There’s paper and pen for you to write a bank draft to me.”
Walt made no move to avail himself of the quill and inkpot placed at the corner of the desk. He elevated his chin to a disdainful angle. “The devil you say! If you were a gentleman, you’d grant me the chance to win back my funds.”
“I’m afraid that wasn’t our agreement. It was winner take all.”
“Only because I thought—”
“You thought I’d be an easy mark.” Just as I was at Eton. Damien had been small for his age back then, alone in the world, a charity student among the hordes of privileged boys from the best families.
Walt nervously gripped the lapels of his forest-green coat. “This is your club. You must have rigged the game.”
Damien gave him a caustic smile. Walt had always been quick to blame his own failings on others, particularly those he considered to be his social inferiors. He would never have dared to fling such an insulting accusation at a fellow gentleman. As much as Damien would have liked to avenge the slur with his fists, he knew that violence would be antithetical to his purpose.
“I allowed you to deal each hand,” he said. “So if there was any cheating at all, it must have been done by you.”
“What blather! You marked the cards somehow.”
“And you inspected the deck before the game commenced. Now, enough of your excuses.” Damien nudged the paper and pen toward him. “Write the bank draft.”
Walt shifted from one foot to the other. “There’s no point,” he said sullenly. “I haven’t sufficient funds in my account.”
They were making headway, at least, since he appeared to have abandoned his false accusation of cheating. He would soon realize that Damien had no interest in fleecing Walt.
At least not of his money.
Damien strolled to the chair behind the desk. “Ask your father for a loan, then.”
“Absolutely not! He despises gambling.”
“Indeed? Then it seems you’re in quite the quandary.”
Walt groped for the quill and jammed the sharpened tip into the silver inkpot. “I’ll write you an IOU if I must,” he said through gritted teeth. “That will have to suffice.”
“No. I’m afraid it won’t. Let me be perfectly clear. I will have my payment before the week is out.”
“Blast you!” Walt tossed down the pen so that black ink spattered the paper. “If you intend for me to sign my soul over to some dodgy moneylender, think again!”
Damien seated himself in the desk chair and steepled his fingers beneath his chin. The time had come to get an answer to the question burning inside him. “Very well,” he said. “Since you have no funds, I’ll allow you to repay me in another way.”
“How? Tell me.”
The hint of desperate hope in the man’s voice gratified Damien. “You have something of mine in your possession. If you return it, I’ll forgive the entire debt.”
Walt frowned. “Something of yours? Why, I’ve scarcely seen you since we left Eton over ten years ago.”
“You stole it from me while we were at school. If you rack your brain, perhaps you’ll recall the incident.”
Damien certainly did. The memories of that long-ago time burned like a canker inside him. An impoverished orphan, he had been taunted and bullied by the other boys. Perhaps his situation wouldn’t have been so dire had he hailed from a highborn family that had fallen on hard times. But his ancestry had been—and still was—an utter mystery.
A matronly woman he’d called Mimsy had raised him in a tiny flat in the London borough of Southwark. Mrs. Mims had taught him proper speech along with a rigorous slate of academic lessons. Perhaps that was why, even as a small boy, Damien sensed he was different. He didn’t fit in with the scruffy, unschooled children who ran free in the neighborhood. At times, Mimsy hinted that his father had royal blood. She spun tales of princely heroes slaying dragons and told him that he, too, must always be brave. As he grew older, he began to ask questions about his absent parents. Mimsy would offer only a vague story that he’d been given to her for safekeeping.
If he probed too persistently, her face took on a worried look that soon silenced him. Not even to satisfy his curiosity would he distress Mimsy. She was all he had in the world.
One day, they boarded the mail coach to Windsor and visited Eton College, where he sat in a stuffy room and took a long examination with numerous written essays and pages of mathematics problems. Afterward, she consulted with one of the headmasters in an ivy-covered building while Damien waited on the stone steps outside, watching the older boys walk past in chattering groups. They looked posh and unapproachable in their formal garb, making him keenly aware of his own shabby attire. When Mimsy came out, she informed him that he had been accepted as a pupil at the boarding school. He protested vehemently at the notion of being left among strangers, but Mimsy was adamant.
Before leaving, she placed a delicate gold chain around his neck. From it dangled a small iron key which he was told to hide beneath his shirt. “I’ve been waiting for the right moment to give this to you, my little prince. When I took you in as a babe, it was tucked in your blankets.”
The key fascinated Damien as he examined it closely. “Did it belong to my father?” he asked. “Where is the lock that it fits?”
“You’ll learn everything someday. It’s all written down in a letter. In the meanwhile, you must guard the key. Never, ever show it to anyone. You’re to study hard and make me proud.” After a tearful hug and the promise of holiday visits, Mimsy trudged out the school gate.
Never to return.
Just before Christmas, the headmaster informed Damien that Mrs. Mims had died from a sudden illness. The news was delivered coldly, without a care that Mimsy was the only mother Damien had ever known.
After lessons that day, he stole outside so that no one would witness his tears. It was bad enough to be taunted for being a charity pupil without adding “sniveling infant” to the list of his sins. He sat among the barren rhododendron bushes with his back to the wall of the cloisters. The wintry cold bit through his short coat, and eventually, his grief spent, he scrubbed his sleeve over his damp face.
Reaching into his stiff-collared shirt, he drew out the key and traced it with his fingertip. One end had three teeth, the other end a little brass crown stamped into the iron and surrounded by a design of curlicues.
With Mimsy gone, this key was the sole link to his past. But she had never explained its significance. Did the crown verify her claim that he had royal blood? Damien wanted to believe it. He wished with all his might that he was a prince with enough riches to draw envy from all the other boys. Perhaps the key opened the door to a treasure room in a castle somewhere.
Visions of gold crowns and heaps of glittering jewels filled his imagination. Then another thought absorbed him. Maybe his father, the king, was imprisoned there, waiting for his son to rescue him …
The scrape of footsteps yanked him out of the fantasy. Damien froze with the key clenched in his fingers.
Walt Stratham approached with two of his hulking cronies. From the moment of Damien’s arrival, they had singled him out for their tormenting. “Hey,” Walt called. “Is that a necklace you’re wearing? You must be a girl in disguise.”
While the other boys chortled, one of them imitating mincing feminine steps, Damien stuffed the key back inside his shirt. Too late.
Walt made a wild grab for the gold chain. “Give me that.”
Damien sprang from the ground in a flurry of punching and kicking. Frantic to protect the precious key, he threw all of his puny strength into the fight. His fist connected with Walt’s nose, sending him staggering backward, blood trickling down his face.
It was the perfect chance to flee, but a fury born of grief transformed Damien into a wild beast. He lunged at the other two boys. He managed a few quick strikes before the pair of them joined forces to overpower him. They threw him to the rocky ground and held his squirming form in place.
In the throes of raw rage, he forgot all caution, shouting, “Let me go! I’m a prince! My father is a king, and he’ll chop off your heads.”
A moment of stunned silence reigned. Then derisive laughter burst from the trio of boys. “King?” one jeered. “You don’t even have a father.”
His nose bloody, Walt bared his teeth in a sneer. “You’re a filthy bastard.” He grabbed the key, snapping its gold chain. “Your sire must be the Devil. That’s what we’ll call you. The Demon Prince.”
* * *
“Well, Burke? Speak up! Tell me what it is you want from me.”
Walt’s voice dragged Damien back to the present. He sat behind the desk in the private study at his club, facing his longtime nemesis. Viscount Greaves stood with his fists clenched at his sides. His irate hazel eyes betrayed his impatience to settle the gaming debt and be gone.
Apparently, Walt didn’t remember the incident; it had been only one of their many clashes at Eton before Damien had grown big and strong enough to best any challenger.
“You took a key from me when I was a first-year,” he said tightly. “You and two of your mates overpowered me behind the cloisters.”
“Key?” Awareness dawned on Walt’s face, followed by a narrowing of his eyes in a guarded expression. “You’re saying you’d erase my losses in exchange for some long-lost trinket? You must be mad.”
“Nevertheless, you’ll bring it to me.”
“Good God, man, that must have been fifteen years ago! You can’t expect me to recall what happened to it. I likely tossed it into a rubbish bin.”
“That isn’t what you said back then. You used to taunt me that you’d put the key where I’d never find it.”
“So? Wherever it is, I’ve forgotten now.”
As he spoke, Walt averted his gaze. His avoidance of a direct look was a clear indicator of deception.
Damien felt his gut tighten with absolute certainty. Walt was lying. He did know the location of the key.
“It would behoove you to remember, then,” Damien said. “It’s your only chance to have your gaming debt forgiven.”
Walt’s resentful gaze slid back. “Why do you want a damned key?” he asked. “Does it fit a strongbox somewhere? It wouldn’t surprise me to learn that you were harboring stolen goods even back then.”
Damien kept his face wiped clean of anger. “You will retrieve the key. I’ll give you until tomorrow evening to bring it to me.”
“It might take longer than that,” Walt said, a crafty glint entering his eyes.
“Don’t even think to trick me. I remember every detail of that key, and I’ll know if it’s a forgery.” Damien paused for dramatic effect. “If you fail to fulfill your end of the bargain, you’ll force me to find another means to collect your debt—a manner that won’t be to your liking.”
“What is that supposed to mean?”
Damien allowed a cold smile. “You have a sister about to make her debut. Innocent, sheltered girls are often susceptible to the charms of a dashing stranger.”
The viscount’s face paled so that his freckles stood out. “By God! You wouldn’t dare go anywhere near Beatrice.”
“Then do as I say. Bring me that key.”
Walt’s chest heaved beneath his forest-green coat, his nostrils flaring. Abruptly, he slammed his fist onto the desk and rattled the neat stacks of gaming discs. “Bastard! You may don the trappings of a gentleman, but you’ll always be an upstart from the gutter.”
Pivoting on his well-shod heel, he threw open the door and stomped out of the study.
Damien surged up from the chair and stalked to the window to stare out into the night. That word never failed to cause a visceral twist inside him. His ancestry had always been a blank slate. Deep inside him burned the need to give substance to his background. To learn who he really was. Not just for his own sake, but for Lily’s.
His chest tightened. His daughter was only six years of age, but someday she would ask him questions about her absent grandparents. She would want to know who they were, where they had come from, why they had abandoned him. Mimsy had mentioned a letter that explained everything, presumably from his parents, but he had never been given her effects after her death. Nor had he found the letter years later, when he’d gone back to his old neighborhood and sought to discover what had happened to her belongings. Without Mimsy, the only person who might have provided the answers, he had no clue to his past.
Except for that key.
The shuffle of footsteps sounded behind him. Reflected in the window glass, a short, bandy-legged servant stepped into the study. Light from the gas wall sconces glinted off a head as bald as a billiard ball. Finn MacNab had once been a man-of-all-work at Eton, and Damien’s sole ally at the school. He and his wife were the only ones to whom Damien had confided his secrets.
At the moment, however, Damien had no desire for company. Turning, he said curtly, “I trust you didn’t have your ear to the door.”
Finn bared his teeth in a grin. “Might have, though I couldna hear it all,” he said in his thick Scottish brogue. “Did his lairdship recollect wha’ happened t’ the key?”
“He hemmed and hawed. But he knows, I’m certain of it.”
“Then he’ll bring it t’ ye on the morrow?”
“He has little choice in the matter.”
Finn waggled a bushy eyebrow. “Beggin’ yer pardon, sir, but these high-and-mighty lairds do hold the upper hand over us mortals.”
“Not this time.” Damien paused, his resolve hardening in regard to the bold plan that he had formulated. “If he fails to comply, I’ll abduct his sister. The key shall be her ransom.”
Copyright © 2014 Macmillan



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44 Responses to “Spotlight & Giveaway: Abducted by a Prince by Olivia Drake”

  1. Tracey Parker

    It definitely starts off really good and leaves you intrigued as to how it will all work out.

  2. Glenda

    Loved the excerpt! I’m adding this to my wish list!! I didn’t have a favorite line, but i’m anxious to see what happens next and fine out what the key opens!!

  3. Barbara E.

    The excerpt definitely left me wanting more, especially the last line: “If he fails to comply, I’ll abduct his sister. The key shall be her ransom.” I can’t wait to read what happens next.

  4. denise

    Don’t even think to trick me. I remember every detail of that key, and I’ll know if it’s a forgery.” Damien paused for dramatic effect. “If you fail to fulfill your end of the bargain, you’ll force me to find another means to collect your debt—a manner that won’t be to your liking.”

  5. Cathy Phillips

    I loved the premise and excerpt from this story and am looking forward to reading it. I especially loved the relationship that Damien had with his Mimsy and the mystery of the key she had given him. The fact that he intended to kidnap Walt’s sister also made me want to read more. I cried at the thought of him as a child at Eton and being bullied.

  6. Kai W.

    Yes, I want to read more about the link this mysterious key holds of the past. I love this phrase from the excerpt: “It would behoove you to remember, then,” Damien said. “It’s your only chance to have your gaming debt forgiven.”

  7. Lekeisha

    “You’re a filthy bastard. Your sire must be the devil. Yes, we’ll call you the demon prince.” LOL! That excerpt is great and I need more.

  8. Diane D - Florida

    I really enjoyed the excerpt, and I definitely would love to read the entire story. Thank you for the chance to win. 🙂

  9. Spring adams

    If he fails to comply, I’ll abduct his sister. Love that part. Can’t wait to read this one.

  10. Joan V.

    “You’re saying you’d erase my losses in exchange for some long-lost trinket? You must be mad.” The key hooked me. Now I want to know more.

  11. Janie McGaugh

    My vavorite line is “If he fails to comply, I’ll abduct his sister. The key shall be her ransom.”

  12. Vicki Clevinger

    I loved it. I can’t wait to read more. I liked the mystery of the key as well and how Mimsy fit into the story. I loved the kast line.

  13. Taswmom

    It really did make me want to know the whole story. It wasn’t really a line, but a section, where Walt didn’t have any real comeback, so he resorted to the traditional bully defense of ‘it was your fault, you cheated, etc.’

  14. Texas Book Lover

    Yep it makes me want to read more. I liked…”Abruptly, he slammed his fist onto the desk and rattled the neat stacks of gaming discs. “Bastard! You may don the trappings of a gentleman, but you’ll always be an upstart from the gutter.”
    Pivoting on his well-shod heel, he threw open the door and stomped out of the study.

  15. ssmommie75

    It definitely left me wanting more. My favorite line, “If you rack your brain, perhaps you’ll recall the incident”. All spunk.

  16. Claira Pam

    The premise is certainly very unique and interesting!! And now I’m intrigued to know what this whole key thing is all about. My favorite bit is “If he fails to comply, I’ll abduct his sister. The key shall be her ransom.” — leaves me itching to know what happens next!!

  17. Nicole Potter (@NiiArt)

    Oooh yes, I liked this one a LOT! I can’t wait to read more! And my favorite line was actually the last one, it’s so foreboding! 🙂

    “If he fails to comply, I’ll abduct his sister. The key shall be her ransom.”

  18. Kate I.

    The final line sealed my wanting to read more: “‘If he fails to comply, I’ll abduct his sister. The key shall be her ransom.'” Based on the book’s title, I’d wager that Walt does not produce the key ….

  19. Jen B

    Great excerpt, I liked ‘Finn waggled a bushy eyebrow. “Beggin’ yer pardon, sir, but these high-and-mighty lairds do hold the upper hand over us mortals.”’

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